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Thursday, 22 March 2018

Wacky Tale

The ship Lucky frans was sinking quickly. “Abandon ship! Everyone into the barrels  hollered Captain Sans  But the crew and passengers knew there were not enough barrels  so they threw temmie floats and even one hot dog overboard. Then everyone dived into the hot water and grabbed onto whatever they could.
Captain Sans ordered everyone to form a line, tie their crafts together, and sing ‘stressed out’. First in line were Sans and Frisk bobbing in their temmie float Next, came papyrus hanging on for dear life to a slimy hotdog They were followed by 20 others.
After 9 days, they were rescued by a strange skeleton. Not one passenger from the Lucky frans has taken a boat ride again.

4 comments:

  1. hi Taylor it is shanaya can i just ask you could edit your work i will like to now if there is a point amonsus this wacky tale but i like the way you used the name sans frisk and papyrus.

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  4. Hi Taylor,
    It is Shanaya here. I like the way you used the names sans frisk and papyrus.

    Next time you could tall me more This works reminds me of a game called Undertail where they use the same names as you did.

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