in progress descriptive writing

For the past week I have been working on writing a character description checkout where i am so far

The greatest showman


The Greatest Showman By Taylor


Fred has gold on his bright velvet jacket and has little gold ends with a little bit of black on his velvet sleeves. he has a gold plate surrounded with black and he had a white as cloud bisnes color on his t shirt and was wearing as dark as the bottom as the ocean pants. he had a glistening white grin and black hair he had a tan kinda skin.





Soon the bright sparkling lights shined into the dark oil like stage as the magnificent dancers walked on to the stage.





Soon they started dancing as the show began. The men wore sparkly white and blue suits and the ladies wore sparkly dress. Quickly a dramatic song started playing soon there was a type roop and a actres swinging from a swing and other actres swinging from another swing then they jumped onto the others swing and continued then the men


started breathing fire to light the gigantic torches.then fred put his head in a lion's mouth!? As the crowded cheered and he ate fire and breathed it back out. Then Fred announced that his show has came to an end and to come back next time.